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A very satisfying story. Prose is great (I really appreciate it in this kind of work) and the narrative structure makes a lot of sense. Considering the power Jennifer had over Brad all this time in the classroom, it must have been immensely satisfying for Brad to be able to get her in this way (love the inclusion of the bare feet tickling on top of the spankings). Jennifer's "comeuppance" was satisfyingly dragged out and layered (unlike other stories where such things are too short).


I don't know about the ending. It's a bit dark but I think it works in a way. Why? The story has a bit of a horror/thriller overtone. Jennifer's POV of the night where she drank too much and isn't in full control other actions reminded me a bit of some of those thriller movies where something very bad often follows a night such as that. It's quite an interesting touch and makes it different from other stories of this genre.


I give this one a high score.